I have decided to go to graduate school next autumn. I know, no cutesy or clever start to this blog post this time. I have been thinking about it for weeks and week, and it became an official "go-for-it" decision last weekend. The process has begun and I am working with
Across the Pond to apply to four of my five university choices. As such, I need to gather some things: references, the good ol' BYU transcript, and a personal statement.
Hold it, a personal statement? What does that even mean? Can't I just state personally that I want to attend such-and-such university and move on? Nope. It's got to be good, thorough, inventive, exciting, not too flowery, and around 500 words. The word count really isn't a big deal, I can care less about that. It's just everything else. I've been thinking about it for the last week, looking up examples, reading articles about how to write a good personal statement. Almost every website says that your personal statement, combined with your references, is a make-it-or-break-it situation. The admissions committee needs to see why you're worth giving a spot to, why you will bring something to the school that no one else can. No pressure, right? I've been trying to be clever, but the writer's block is strong. It's so strong that when I sat down in front of my computer to write one paragraph of my personal statement, I got three pathetic sentences.
Then it hit me. I love writing on my blog. I know not a lot of people read it, but I enjoy writing and hoping that something that I write will brighten someone's day. I cannot recall a single time when I have sat down in front of my computer to write a blog post and have had nothing to say. So, I decided that I am going to write my rough draft of my personal statement right here, right on my blog for everyone to see. After I let it stew for a day, then I will take it and start to refine, revise, and revamp the thing.
So, these are the basic questions I am going to answer:
1) Why do you want to study this subject?
2) Why do you want to study in the UK?
3) What are your strengths and skills? What can you bring to the
program?
4) Evidence of knowledge and experience of the subject.
5) How will the degree help you in your future career?
By the way, I am applying master's programs in Applied Linguistics and English Language Teaching. And thus it begins. Please feel free to put your opinions about my rough (very rough) draft in the comments below. Anything helps!
Here it goes.....(Remember that ROUGH is the key word here.)
With the increasing populations of people that are being displaced from their home countries through war, difficult political climates, flat lining economies, there is a greater need to cross cultural communication. These refugees and immigrants are moving throughout Europe and traveling to the UK, Canada, and the US, where they are lost, exhausted, and in need of jobs to support a new life in a new place. In order for these people to be successful in these English-speaking countries, they need to learn English quickly and efficiently. Being trained in applied linguistics is a great asset to this mass migration. Even more so, a background in applied linguistics will further equip me to provide solutions to language-related problems as the Western world is becoming increasingly multilingual.
During my undergraduate career at BYU, I studied the Middle East and Arabic. I extensively researched and studied not only the language, but the culture, history, politics, and economy. I had the opportunity to intensively study Arabic abroad in Cairo, Egypt, where I interacted on a daily basis with the people and learned how to function and thrive within the Arab and Egyptian cultures. My decision to study Middle Eastern Studies/Arabic (MESA) has greatly prepared me to study applied linguistics at an advanced level because it not only taught me how to be with people who do not share my language or culture, but how to overcome cultural differences and learn how to communicate. Not only was I able to further improve my Arabic skills, but I assisted many Egyptians in their English skills.
Because of this experience, I have sought out opportunities and education to improve my teaching skills. I have volunteered in several capacities as both an English and Arabic language instructor or tutor, as well as completing the CELTA (Cambridge's Certificate of English Language Teaching) in Belfast. I also have professional teaching experience: I am currently teaching in a Shanghai bilingual school and working as a private tutor. With these varied experiences, I have significantly developed my teaching skills in both an adult and young learner classrooms. I have significant experience in designing a curriculum, adapting teaching materials, implementing and using various teaching styles and lesson structures, and classroom management.
I am interested in learning more about second language acquisition, intercultural communication in the classroom, and motivation in language education. Once I finish my master's degree, my long-term goals include working with refugee placements services in the UK and the US teaching English, with a primary focus on Arabic speakers. I also want to develop a program with various UK and US schools or education companies for refugees to acquire and develop teaching skills by teaching their native languages to English speakers. As this program grows and flourishes, I plan to seek further education to become a teacher trainer, such as completing the DELTA (Cambridge's Diploma of English Language Teaching).
(Name of specific university here) offers a unique opportunity for my postgraduate study. I would have the opportunity to be an international student and gain a unique perspective studying at the master's level; I can build relationships with other students and faculty that will advance my career. The flexibility in the (insert name of specific program here) program allows me to hone my focus and frame my specific career path with optional modules such as (insert optional modules here.)
I am highly aware of the superb reputation of your school, and my
research into your program has served to deepen my interest in
attending. I know that, in addition to your excellent faculty, your (insert name of program here) ranks as one of the top in the UK. I hope you will give me the privilege of continuing my studies at your fine institution.
So......thoughts??